bachanon Posted March 21, 2006 Share Posted March 21, 2006 OBJECTIVE: To work with a respected home builder as a construction supervisor/superintendent or assistant supervisor/superintendent.QUALIFICATIONSOver ten years of time-line production and successful logistics experience. Excellent oral and written communication skills.EMPLOYMENT2003-2006 Dispatcher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jm1fd Posted March 21, 2006 Share Posted March 21, 2006 The way rates are headed up, I see the pace of home construction leveling off, or declining in the next few years. There may be some tough times ahead for you.OBJECTIVE To work with a respected home builder as a construction supervisor/superintendent.QUALIFICATIONSOver ten years of time-line production and successful logistics experience. Excellent oral and written communication skills.EDUCATION1998-2000 Associate Degree of Applied Arts, North Harris Montgomery Community CollegeEMPLOYMENT2003-2006 Dispatcher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bachanon Posted March 21, 2006 Author Share Posted March 21, 2006 i felt that new home construction would be the easiest area to move into at this time. ultimately, i would not be limited to new home construction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bachanon Posted April 7, 2006 Author Share Posted April 7, 2006 i had hoped for more criticism of my attempted career change. you can't hurt my feelings. go ahead, be critical and opinionated. i count on haifers for that. thanks a bunch. k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mls1202 Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 I would consider going into a bit more detail on your Applied Arts degree, perhaps highlighting how it is relevant to the job you are applying for. If it is not directly applicable, then move it towards the end to emphasize your work experience which I find to be more relevant. There is no rule stating that education needs to go at the top.As you probably know, resumes only get about 6 to 10 seconds of review before being separated in a pile for trash or one for longer look. That said, I recommend re-writing your job experience at Madco to include short, concise, bulleted items that stand out. I found myself reading through that part without really taking in what you were trying to say. Finally, being nitpicky, I might prefer to not include "we" or "I" in your job histories. Third person keeps a level of formality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevfiv Posted April 7, 2006 Share Posted April 7, 2006 yes, either expand on the education, or drop it to the bottom (or below work experience if there is more than what you posted) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bachanon Posted April 7, 2006 Author Share Posted April 7, 2006 thank you. that is exactly the type pointers i had hoped for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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